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I feel a some strange pain in my head
what is it?
Every day i fight  for my life
for my dreams, but...
I´m another
nobody knows me

The people think that
i have changed they feel me like a stranger
i am not the same

Now the only thing  
i want to feel is the love or the pain or to hope anything
i conclude my life
i am not the same
in the past,  
the people make my happy
and today make me a loser
now i am the most embittered in this world
©2008-2009 ~farcandel
:iconfarcandel:

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i wrote this
after see cloverfield

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:iconescapetomymind:
huh. this is so very similar to something i wrote (not on my home page, and not in poetry format)
i think its great, very bitter though, is that the emotion that was captured in this poem that you were trying to portray?

--
Me: Dad, where do babies come from?
Dad: Well, we got you at wall mart, your brother at target...
Me: HUH?!
Dad: What? It was a blue light special.
Me: You got me ON SALE?!
Mom:That explains a lot, we got your sister at Best buy.

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